The chart below shows the results of a svrvey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Austrian cities

The chart below shows the results of a svrvey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Austrian cities
This
pie chart displays how much
of
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tea and
coffee
consumed
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by the population
from
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cities
of
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Australia. The x-axis shows the five
cities
such
as Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adalaide
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Adelaide
and Hobart
while
the y-axis illustrates the percentage of city
people
.
Firstly
, it is very clear that in all five
cities
people
are interested
to buy
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drinks directly from the café in the
last
four weeks.
On
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first
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the first
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analysis
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64% of
people
from Melbourne and 62% from Sydney went to café for drinks when
comparing
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with the
amount
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number
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of
people
who bought fresh or
instant
coffee
during
past
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the past
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32 days.
However
, those who paid for the
instant
and fresh
coffee
from Syndey and Melbourne are almost similar with a slight difference in
range
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of
people
. Alternatively, 34% of
people
paid for fresh
coffee
in Brisbane and Adelaide. But in
Adelaid
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Adelaide
Almost 50% took brand new
coffee
and
instant
coffee
.
Furthermore
, 63% of humans from Hobart got
coffee
or tea straight from the shop,
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less than 40% took fresh
coffee
and 54% got
instant
coffee
in
past
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4 weeks. To summarise, though
people
from these five
cities
have different drinking habits
but
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most of them
preferred
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to drink
coffee
or tea directly from the shop.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, cities, people, instant with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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