The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table displays the
number
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of
people
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from different regions around the world who travelled internationally between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
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, the total
number
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of
people
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that travelled internationally increased significantly over the period.
Additionally
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, Europe accounted for the largest
number
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of international
travellers
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in all year. In 1990, over 280
million
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Europeans travelled internationally,
while
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80
million
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Americans and 60
million
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people
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from Asia and the Pacific
also
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travelled abroad.
Furthermore
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, 18.2
million
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Africans travelled in that year too,
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the figure for the Middle East was only around half of that, at 9.8
million
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. Over the following fifteen years, the
number
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of European
travellers
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continued to rise, peaking at 400.2
million
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in 2005. The
number
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of international
travellers
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from Asia and the Pacific grew quickly, rising from 80.3
million
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in 1995 to nearly 140
million
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in 2005. Meanwhile, the
number
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of American
travellers
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peaked at 118.2
million
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in 2000, before dropping 5
people
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to 113.2 in 2005. The figures for the remaining regions
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increased over the period, with African
travellers
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accounting for 28.7
million
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and those from the Middle East at 15.8
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, travellers, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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