You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The table displays the
number
of
people
from different regions around the world who travelled internationally between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, the total
number
of
people
that travelled internationally increased significantly over the period.
Additionally
, Europe accounted for the largest
number
of international
travellers
in all year. In 1990, over 280
million
Europeans travelled internationally,
while
80
million
Americans and 60
million
people
from Asia and the Pacific
also
travelled abroad.
Furthermore
, 18.2
million
Africans travelled in that year too,
while
the figure for the Middle East was only around half of that, at 9.8
million
. Over the following fifteen years, the
number
of European
travellers
continued to rise, peaking at 400.2
million
in 2005. The
number
of international
travellers
from Asia and the Pacific grew quickly, rising from 80.3
million
in 1995 to nearly 140
million
in 2005. Meanwhile, the
number
of American
travellers
peaked at 118.2
million
in 2000, before dropping 5
people
to 113.2 in 2005. The figures for the remaining regions
also
increased over the period, with African
travellers
accounting for 28.7
million
and those from the Middle East at 15.8
million
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, travellers, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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