The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map illustrates the modifications of the Rhymouth

village

from 1995 to the present day.

Overall

, what we can see in

this

map is that

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there are large amounts of the development in each part of the

village

.New homes added to

another ones

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and

forest

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park and farmland

was became

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the golf and tennis

center

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. In the west north of the

village

, a lot of houses were added for

population

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the population

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, so built new and wide transport road,

elsewhere

in the

north east

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northeast

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of the Ryemouth

village

, ancient farmland was redeveloped

to

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the

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considerable golf course,

while

in the east of the

village

, extensive forest park was cut down and became a smaller tennis centre. In the present-day map, the enormous fishing port which was in the south of the

village

was demolished,

while

in the east south of

this

place,

comfortable

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car park was constructed,

however

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the massive hotel and tiny cafe remained unchanged.

Moreover

on the

village

's south-western side. The old shops were pulled down and become the modern restaurants,

while

the luxurious departments replaced

huge

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fishing market.