The maps show the development of an area in Someland over a time span of 20 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the development of an area in Someland over a time span of 20 years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps
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how Someland’s area
constructed
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over 20 years period of time.
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, we can see that Someland witnessed a massive change over
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time. Especially, a significant number of electricity generators were added all around the area. In 1990, a river, which run through the middle of the
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from north to south, divided the
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into two separate parts. To the north and south of the
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. There were forests and numerous mountains. To the west of the
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, an ancient structure was built, and there were rare plants and animals which lived nearby. Villages and farmlands were erected to the left side of the river.
Someland
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Some land
Homeland
had significant developments over 20 years. By 2010, a new hydroelectricity dam was constructed to the north of the river, where a lake and a hotel building were added. We can see the ancient
structure
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, rare plants and animals area were replaced by plenty of power stations. To the south-east of the
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, villages
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remained,
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farmlands were removed.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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