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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied graph depicts the proportion of
GDP
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's components produced by IT and service industries in the United Kingdom from 1992 to 2000.
Overall
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, it can be seen that both IT and service institutes experienced an upward trend, but IT had a much higher ratio during entire the 8-year period.
According to
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 the IT sector, the ratio of
GDP
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 production began at just above 6% in 1992. After that,
this
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 number increased by 2% to become 8% in 1994.
Moreover
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, in the next four years, the
GDP
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 was produced by 12% which continued climbing steadily and hit a peak of more than 14% in 2000.
On the other hand
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, in 1992, the percentage of generated
GDP
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 by the service industry was 4%. These figures kept rising and reached almost 8% in 1998 before
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 a significant decline in the past four years and remained stable and elevated marginally by 1% in 2000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • components
  • GDP
  • consumption
  • investment
  • government spending
  • net exports
  • display
  • categories
  • largest
  • increase
  • stable
  • range
  • decline
  • fluctuate
  • gradual
  • positive values
  • negative values
  • overall
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