The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The line graph illustrates
information
about the number
of enquiries
the Tourist Information
Office received in one city from January
to June
in
2011
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the number
of enquiries
received by the Tourist Information
Office in person and by telephone increased in six months, while
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enquiries
by letter and email slightly decreased between January
and June
in 2011.
The data on figures shows that the number
of enquiries
received in person had dramatically increased approximately from 400 to 1900 over a period of six months. Although
the number
of enquiries
received by telephone between January
and April is a period of slight volatility aroun
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June
there was sharp
increase from 1000 to 1600.
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that the number
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