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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
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The line graph illustrates
information
 about the
number
 of
enquiries
 the Tourist
Information
 Office received in one city from
January
 to
June
in
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2011
Overall
 the
number
 of
enquiries
 received by the Tourist
Information
 Office in person and by telephone increased in six months,
while
number
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the number
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 of
enquiries
 by letter and email slightly decreased between
January
 and
June
 in 2011. The data on figures shows that the
number
 of
enquiries
 received in person had dramatically increased approximately from 400 to 1900 over a period of six months.
Although
 the
number
 of
enquiries
 received by telephone between
January
 and April is a period of slight volatility
aroun
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around
 900 to 1000, from April to
June
 there was
sharp
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 increase from 1000 to 1600. Despite the data on figures gives
information
 that the
number
 of
enquiries
 received by letter and emails remained stable at 600 to 800 from
January
 to March.
However
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 the
number
 of
enquiries
 by letter/email fell from about 700 to 350 between March and
June
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words information, number, enquiries, january, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 7 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • in person
  • by letter/email
  • by telephone
  • general trend
  • six-month period
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • monthly data
  • comparison
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