The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

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the Tourist

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Office received in one city from

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2011

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the

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received by the Tourist

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Office in person and by telephone increased in six months,

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of

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by letter and email slightly decreased between

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and

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in 2011. The data on figures shows that the

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received in person had dramatically increased approximately from 400 to 1900 over a period of six months.

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received by telephone between

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and April is a period of slight volatility

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900 to 1000, from April to

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increase from 1000 to 1600. Despite the data on figures gives

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that the

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received by letter and emails remained stable at 600 to 800 from

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to March.

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the

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by letter/email fell from about 700 to 350 between March and

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