Many people agree that free public transportation should be available in most major cities. Will the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantages?
The idea of providing
no cost
public transport is a topic of ongoing debate. Add a hyphen
no-cost
While
this
proposal may offer some benefits nevertheless
in my opinion, it's
disadvantages are far more.
The most significant Replace the word
its
drawbacks
of free public transportation Fix the agreement mistake
drawback
is
the huge financial burden it can create for Change the verb form
are
government
tressure
. There is a specific amount which any transit company needs to run and maintain the modes of travel Correct your spelling
pressure
such
as buses and trains. Right now, companies are covering their expenses for fares but if these services are completely free then
government
has to pay for Add an article
the government
it
. To fulfil these demands either Correct pronoun usage
them
government
will Correct article usage
the government
steet
collecting more hafty taxes Correct your spelling
start
feom
local individuals or they have to divert the resources from any other sector which could be more significant Correct your spelling
from
such
as health care or education.
The another
disadvantage associated with Correct quantifier usage
other
this
proposal is thst
it could be more Correct your spelling
that
crowdy
. If there is no charge for travelling, Correct your spelling
crowded
then
it will attract more people even those who don't really need to commute. By
Change preposition
As
the
result of Correct article usage
a
this
misuse, it will arise
Correct your spelling
raise
the
health and safety Correct article usage
apply
concern
for genuine riders. Travellers will Fix the agreement mistake
concerns
more
in close contact Add a missing verb
be more
of
each other, so there will be more possibilities for crimes and illness.
It is Change preposition
with
also
essential to consider that the provision of free transport will eliminate the environment
pollution and some other issues associated with Replace the word
environmental
this
grave. This
idea will motivate population
to use public transport Add an article
the population
instead
of private vehicles which significantly reduce
noise and air pollution. So, Correct subject-verb agreement
reduces
while
doimg
Correct your spelling
doing
this
, it will be more pocket and environment friendly
.
Add a hyphen
environment-friendly
To sum up
, government
should consider both Add an article
the government
pros
and cons before launching Correct article usage
the pros
this
policy. Instead
of running it completely free, it should be good
option to reduce the fare so that everyone can afford it and it will not be Add an article
a good
burden
for anyone to run Add an article
a burden
this
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