The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustrated maps provide information about the differences in a
museum
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between 1998 and a decade later. In general, there are several noticeable changes, replacements, and new amenities,
although
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the old rooms still exist.
To begin
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with, the
museum
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in 1998 had three permanent exhibition rooms and six various zones,
such
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as a garden,
cafe
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, shop, ticket entrance and exit place, temporary exhibition area, WC and bags and cots cloakroom. In the middle of the
museum
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, there was the hugest garden,
while
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in the right corner beside the shop, bags and coats zones were the smallest room. Moving to the next map, the design slightly changed in 2008. All permanent exhibition rooms are set in a row and close to each other, whilst a decade ago, they were spread to the left and right of the
museum
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.
In addition
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, the bags and coats cloakroom has been relocated to the left corner and separated from the WC, but it remains beside the shop.
Besides
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these changes, the
museum
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enhances new areas, namely the restaurant, fountains, and
cafe
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sitting points. The restaurant is beside the
cafe
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,
whereas
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the
cafe
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sitting and fountains areas are in the garden.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words museum, cafe with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rectangular shape
  • central garden area
  • symmetrically arranged
  • expanded galleries
  • visitor flow management
  • temporary exhibition space
  • permanent gallery
  • visitor facilities
  • customer service focus
  • dedicated children's area
  • expanded restroom facilities
  • museum gardens
  • unoccupied outdoor space
  • shift towards long-term exhibits
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