the chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the Uk divided in to three categories, from 1995-2002
The chart given illustrates the entire
time
of telephone
calls in the UK, separated into three groups namely local, national and international, and mobiles
from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, it can be seen that local telephone
calls had the highest time
among the three categories, however
, the opposite was true for mobiles
.
Since 1995, the total number of minutes of local telephone
calls reached the highest peak all over the
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apply
time
and continued to increase from 74 billion
to approximately 90 billion
until 1999. The mobiles
had the lowest time
and were enhanced by time
just like the locals.
From 1999 to 2002, the time
of local telephone
calls seemed to decrease which is contra to the past. There was also
a dramatic change in the total minutes of mobiles
which extend
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extended
12
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from 12
billion
to over 40 billion
. Although
, after 8 years we can see that the national and internation
phone calls had the most sustained increase among Correct your spelling
international
three
groups.Correct article usage
the three
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