Economic development always harms the environment. It is impossible for a country to both develop the economy and protect the environment at the same time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Economic advancement is the root of a rustic where all dwellers have
right
to enjoy amenities in a rustic. Nowadays habitat is defacts people's lives by increasing diseases, viruses and weather. I Correct article usage
the right
accord
with the latter notion of discord.
To start with, The most obvious reason is that every bucolic has distinct levels of state and government surely does that at the same time with the help of other province ministers. Verb problem
agree
Apart from
this
, citizens of the nations have different types of council parties according to
their working in public that domains are free education, jobs, building hospitals or knock-out diseases and climate. For example
, India
has a variety of council parties the head of India
is the prime minister seat and prime minister narinder
Modi has the power to communicate with others overseas to build relationships and brotherhoods for increasing trade. Change the capitalization
Narinder
Therefore
, Every nation has the power to improve country's
situation through the collaboration of authority.
Correct article usage
a country's
Further
reinforcing my perspective, Collaboration with the community by-laws to improve the environment and development economy
. For instance
, According to
the World Health Organization in the past days in 2022 when the coronavirus increased in India
the Add a comma
India,
economy
collapsed where all sectors did no
make profits or businesses closed and not many hospitals were available for people so, At that time Correct your spelling
not
India
made self independent
by their own worked ability with humans and governments they both Add a hyphen
self-independent
were follow
rules after they applied laws corona cases were low and remain the Change the verb form
followed
economy
is grows. In spite of economic advancement is important for all locals of countries rather than improve
the environment. Wrong verb form
improving
Hence
, the government also
gives funds to every province where all citizens and council parties have taken necessary steps to improve the environment and develop the economy
.
To conclude
, Albeit
with the community and government together both taking action to clean their nation and with the bits of help of modern infrastructure economic evolution will more grow by the taking authority steps.Correct word choice
apply
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