The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much
The supplied graphs illustrate the average ratio of three types of nutrients
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sodium
, saturated fat and added Change preposition
including sodium
sugar
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exciting
in the daily meals of American citizens and it can be unhealthy if eaten too much.
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which are abundant
Overall
, it can be seen that dinners and lunches have Linking Words
great
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a great
amount
of nutrient Use synonyms
contents
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content
while
breakfast has the lowest Linking Words
amount
. Apart from that, Use synonyms
sugar
is mainly high in snacks.
In detail, the Use synonyms
amount
of Use synonyms
the
sodium taken by Americans in their regular meals is found in dinners at 43% followed by lunchtimes that contain 29% of sodium. Both breakfasts and snakes have the lowest percentages Correct article usage
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for
14%. In a similar fashion, the consumption of saturated fat Change preposition
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is
eaten in dinner Unnecessary verb
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represent
37% with less Correct subject-verb agreement
represents
amount
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consumed in lunch for about 26%. Snakes and breakfast Unnecessary verb
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recorded
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were recorded
21
% and 16% respectively.
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at 21
sugar
in Use synonyms
the
typical meals, American people eat 42% of Correct article usage
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sugar
in their snacks. Use synonyms
moreover
, 23% is had in the dinnertime. Linking Words
Sugar
content in breakfast and snacks does not exceed 19%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, amount with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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