The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The assigned bar graph reflects information about average sales of selected food items at the brisk cafe by season of winter and summer.

Such

items are hot

caffeine

, iced espresso, amalgamation and

potato

salad

. It is evident from the bar graph that most highest sales of hot espresso in the winter season is 75%. Following data the second highest is alloy which is half

whereas

ice cream and

potato

salad

are almost the same at 22% yet no revenue was generated from iced

caffeine

this

occasion. Probing ahead, In the summer duration amalgamation and

potato

salad

are in constant position making profits it is accounted for more than

two fifth

Add a hyphen

two-fifth

show examples

. ,

While

iced

cappuccino

and ice cream is nearly 40% hot

cappuccino

has 10% less than make sales as compared to iced

cappuccino

. In both seasons there are two sectors in which the company makes profits more in hot

caffeine

and admixture or

potato

salad

and iced

cappuccino

during cold time and hot sessions.

Overall

According to

the data hot

caffeine

and soups are in demand rather the iced espresso and

potato

salad

in winter but hot duration iced

caffeine

, ice cream, and hot

cappuccino

are popular and make regular profits from it.

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selected food items
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consumer preferences
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The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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