The diagram below illustrates the recycling process of discarded glass bottles. Provide a summary of the information by mentioning the main features and make appropriate comparisons wherever relevant.
The diagram shows by which wasted
glass
bottles
are being recycled. Overall
, there are several stages involved during the process, beginning with the collection of the waste and ending in the distribution.
Firstly
, the wasted glass
bottles
are deposited in collection points before they are loaded onto a truck to be transported to glass
recycling facilities. In these facilities, once cleaned with high-pressure water, the bottles
are then
separated based on their colour whether they are clear, green, or brown.
In the next stage, bottles
of each colour are torn into pieces separately to be prepared for the burning process. Following that, the pieces are ready to be burnt in a furnace and produce recycled liquid glass
. After that, the recycled liquid glass
is combined with new liquid glass
and the mixture is shaped in a bottle mould. Finally
, the new bottles
are ready to be used for various products and distributed for sale.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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