In many countries, there is a push to get as many young people going to university as possible. To what extent do you think this effort is a worthwhile one? Do you think some people can benefit from not going to university?

There are a multitude of nations that promote the youth obtaining a university education. In

this

essay, I will discuss why

this

notion can be of benefit to some but

also

a hindrance to others and form a conclusion. Many countries globally encourage the young to obtain a tertiary degree as it is a benefit to that

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economy. In recent years, the standard fees to attend

such

an institution have risen dramatically.

For instance

, international students now pay $20,000 annually to complete a degree. These monetary funds circle back to the government and officials who reign the country.

Furthermore

, the financial earnings accumulated from these facilities are invested in infrastructure that will put that nation at an advantage.

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, will cause an influx of people to flock to that land and spend money that will increase economic stability. Tertiary education is

also

important for some specific occupations,

such

as medicine. A person cannot become a doctor if they do not possess a medical degree.

Similarly

, a teacher must first pursue some form of higher study before they can

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participate

in that field of work.

However

, there are other widespread opportunities that can be just as beneficial,

such

as apprenticeships.

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avenue teaches all the relevant life skills that are needed

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an adult. To give some examples, starting a career from an earlier age results in determination, perseverance and resilience being instilled into their minds.

Such

virtues are needed throughout life regardless of the career path they eventually may choose.

Additionally

, opting away from

further

learning saves a significant amount of money, which can be used at a later stage. In conclusion,

although

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is advantageous for the land’s economy, exploring other ventures can increase competencies in other areas like

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grit and

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.