The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
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the depicted figure outlines road access to a specific hospital, named
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Hospital in 2007 and 2010.
overall
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, the most striking part would be many new refurbishments have taken place in these years.
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, it can be seen in 2010 a gigantic bus station was located in the same spot as the bus stops were located in 2007 on the northern side of the
City
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Hospital,
secondly
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, unlike in 2007 when the
City
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Hospital had one door, in 2010 a brand new eastern door was added. It
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noticeable that the parking spot dramatically expanded.
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in 2010 staff had a separate parking space, in 2007 it was only one shared parking space that belonged to both staff and the public.
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, two roundabouts were allocated on the south side
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the north side of the hospital route, the mentioned roundabouts were connected to the bus station.
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, the size of the Ring Road and the
City
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Roas was not altered
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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