The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
the depicted figure outlines road access to a specific hospital, named
City
Hospital in 2007 and 2010.
overall
, the most striking part would be many new refurbishments have taken place in these years. Firstly
, it can be seen in 2010 a gigantic bus station was located in the same spot as the bus stops were located in 2007 on the northern side of the City
Hospital, secondly
, unlike in 2007 when the City
Hospital had one door, in 2010 a brand new eastern door was added.
It it
noticeable that the parking spot dramatically expanded. Correct your spelling
is
Although
in 2010 staff had a separate parking space, in 2007 it was only one shared parking space that belonged to both staff and the public. Moreover
, two roundabouts were allocated on the south side as well as
the north side of the hospital route, the mentioned roundabouts were connected to the bus station. However
, the size of the Ring Road and the City
Roas was not alteredSubmitted by maryam.niknamm on
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