In many countries, people watch many foreign made television programs and Internet videos. The dominance of imported entertainment is harmful to the cultures of these countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Foreign made
television programs and Internet Add a hyphen
Foreign-made
videos
are popular in many countries
including Indonesia. Should they be banned in order to protect the local cultures of this
country? I strongly agree with this
view for a number of reasons.
Firstly
, foreign made
television programs basically have their own values. They uphold the freedom of expression for everyone including children. Add a hyphen
foreign-made
This
kind of program might give awareness about aspect
of foreign cultures that might be not popular Fix the agreement mistake
aspects
such
as LGBTQ+ issues in some countries
. Moreover
, this
would have enormous impacts on the people
especially young people
who live in the more conservative countries
. For instance
, people
who live in religious countries
are not allowed to watch, follow, or agree with LGBTQ+ and views related to these activities.
Turning to Internet videos
, other reasons these
are harmful to the culture of some Correct pronoun usage
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countries
because they usually contain inappropriate material such
as pornographic and violent content. This
material would have huge
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a huge
impacts
on the culture of society. Fix the agreement mistake
impact
In addition
, these videos
would influence the
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people
’s perspective
when they encounter Fix the agreement mistake
perspectives
with
social hardships. Change preposition
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For example
, when young people
watch pornographic videos
, they would
get more negative exposure and see woman or their Verb problem
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peer
as sexual Fix the agreement mistake
peers
object
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objects
and
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make
it Wrong verb form
making
as
common action for Change preposition
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several
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people
to do the
violence.
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To sum up
, the dominance of imported entertainment such
as foreign made
television programs and Internet Add a hyphen
foreign-made
videos
are very dangerous in many countries
including Indonesia that uphold the
religious values strongly. For some Correct article usage
apply
countries
they must keep the value to maintain their sustained own culture for their future generations.Add a comma
countries,
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