The charts illustrate the number of people affected by four types of noise pollution day and night in cities and rural areas in 2007. Summarize and make comparison where relevant.
The bar
chats
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chart
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show
shows
, Correct subject-verb agreement
show
people
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that people
count which
disturbed by 4 noise pollution types Verb problem
were
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the whole
whole
day in 2007. The units are given by millions.
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the whole
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of Correct article usage
The majority
noice
in cities and rural areas , Correct your spelling
noise
overall
, contained traffic both
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in both
of
rural and urban areas Change preposition
apply
unlike
industry. As can be seen from charts, voice affected Add the comma(s)
, unlike
more
more people in day than night, Change the word
apply
while
city than rural areas.
Traffic noise affect
about 60 and 40 million persons Change the verb form
affects
in
day and night respectively. Change preposition
apply
In addition
, Train and Aircraft sound affected only approximately 8 millions
people.Change to singular
million
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