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The table bellows shows the number of motor vehicles per 1000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.

The table bellows shows the number of motor vehicles per 1000 inhabitants in eight countries in 1990 and 2000.
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The given illustration delineates the proportion of motorized means of transportation in a few nations in two subsequent decades. Data are measured per thousands of residents.
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, a glance at the chart indicates that the volume of motor vehicles in Brazil was bombarded,
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 trend followed by Romania.
Although
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 figure fluctuated in other countries, Colombia was the only state that stood stable over the years. In detail, The Bahamas was a mere country which experienced a decline between 1990 and 2000, from 235 to 187. Meanwhile, Colombia tried to maintain the number of these means of transport
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 having the least quantity, 1.
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, Brazil was the dominant regime in
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 regard, since the ratio of
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 motorized vehicle racketed over the period, from 55 in 1990 to 13580 in 2000.
Whereas
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 upward trend in Romania was really exaggerated, the data for countries
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 as New Zealand, Luxembourg, Jordan and Chile had a slight jump.

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