The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparions where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the proportion of boutiques,which closed and opened throughout the period from 2011 to 2018 in one nation. Looking from an
overall
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perspective, it is readily apparent that in regards that closing and opening of different stores witnessed fluctuation during 8 years but it showed a downward trend during given 8 year period. Regarding commencing new
shops
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it can be seen that in 2011 nearly 8500 stores began their work
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by the following year the proportion decreased to about 4000. After that, the
number
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of
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which newly started their work had risen to just over 6000 in 20014. But in 2015
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figure fell to 4000 in the next duration.
This
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scale of retiring remains unchanged until 2017. But after that, it again dropped to roughly 3000 in 2018.
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, from closing figure duplicates that in 2011 around 6500
shops
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closed and
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number
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declined from the next duration.
Then
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it started to increase and reached to about just over 7000 in 2013
this
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rate did not long
last
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and it decreased to almost 6500 and by the following year it plunged to under 1000 and
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it rocketed to approximately 5000 in 2016.
Then
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it went up gradually next two years.The graph below shows the
number
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of
shops
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that closed and the
number
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of new
shops
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that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
comparions
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comparisons
where relevant.
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