The graph shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The line chart illustrates the comparison of the
value
between closed and new shops from 2011 to 2018.
In general, the graphs had fluctuated value
year by year. Moreover
, the number of shop closures
was higher than openings
but in the end, the value
of openings
was higher than closures
.
Regarding the closures
' value
and openings
in 2011, we can see starting
point of the Correct article usage
the starting
closures
was approximately 8500 and the openings
had a value
of 6500. Furthermore
, the gap of starting point was only 2000 but in 2015, the gap had increased to 3500. However
, the range between closures
and openings
in 2018 reached approximately 2000.
In terms of the significant decrease in the number shops
from 2011 to 2018, the number of Change preposition
of shops
openings
had the highest decrease from 2014 to 2015, with the
count was 6000 to 500. Correct article usage
a
Moreover
, the openings
in 2015 to 2016 were turned to increased value
to 10 per cent from the value
in 2015.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "moreover".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, closures, openings with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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