With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, the
internet
, social media apps, and websites easily available to children
, create a dangerous situation for them. They should give only limited access to the internet
. In my opinion, this
is true, I am heartedly in favor
of Change the spelling
favour
this
. In this
essay, I will share the reasons with examples to justify my reasons.
Firstly
, parents
are giving the mobile to their kids at an early age. In this
era, the Internet
is easily available and they learn both good and bad things through the Internet
. Sometimes parents
are busy in jobs and they are not able to take care of their children
properly. For example
, in most cases when parents
do not give adequate time to their young, they find a way to get rid of their loneliness and are attracted to many social sites. Moreover
, they learn things that are not meant for them like hacking, and theft.
On the other hand
, parental control should be there. The child safety mode option should be initiated on the mobile and limited access should be granted. The history on mobile should be regularly monitored. Firewalls should be used to prevent exposure to sensitive sites. Parents
should spend quality time with their children
. For instance
, crime rates have increased like kidnappings and pornography because children
get trapped by unknown people.
In conclusion, the Internet
has lots of benefits, but they have some drawbacks. If anything is used beyond the limit then
it has a negative impact. I believe that the Internet
is helpful for children
in completing their homework and learning new skills if parental control is there. Children
could be protected from life-threatening situations if given proper guidance and attention.Submitted by lavneet.kumar45 on
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