The chart below show how frequently people in US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 2013

The chart below show how frequently people in US ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 2013
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The assigned bar graph reflects the information about what American citizens ate in fast-cooking restaurants between 2003, 2006 and 2013. How people were eating 6 different times in a year. It is evident that most ate fast foodstuff in 2006 and 2003 once a week and once or twice a month it was the same it was about 33%. The following data the second highest was in the 2003 hour people ate junk cooking once a week and once or twice a month it was more than one third. Interestingly a few times a moment in the constant in the years 2006 and 2013 it was about 15 per cent. The rest of the several times a week the most demanded fast foodstuff in 2006 rather two were nearly 15%. Probing ahead, in the
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two duration people did not visit too much in restaurants that were every day and never these were least ate junk foodstuff as compared to others duration of the time it was less than a tiny proportion.
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, the demand for fast meals from every day to once a was increased in the period of 2003 and 2006.
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, the erratic pattern was seen in 2003.
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