The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram describes the people following of

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of sports in one area in 1997 and 2017. The number is measured by

thousands

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. In general, tennis was the most popular workout that was

love

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by adults both in 1997 and 2017.

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, basketball and cricket were to be the sports with the lowest enthusiasts. Both golf and swimming stayed at the same level for 20 years, around thirty

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thousands

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. It means, there were no significant differences. Football and rugby were at the same level with the most significant increase from 30

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to almost fifty

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. Followed by basketball was incline more than ten

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in the period. Cricket was the only

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sport that decreased in participation. it dramatically decreased by almost 80 per cent from 1997 to 2017. The given data shows, that in 2017 cricket was the lowest sport with less than ten

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participants and the other six sports were have participants more than twenty

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people.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

162 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

participation rate
increase/decrease in numbers
trend
decade
relatively stable
major sports
potential reasons
contributing factors
public interest
comparison

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