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The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B.

The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B.
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A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the favourite subjects of pupils from two different middle schools. Looking from an
overall
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 perspective, it is evident that there was an upward trend witnessed in
school
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 A, the reverse pattern was true for
school
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 B. A dramatic increase is seen in the proportion of sports for
school
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 A. In terms of
school
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 A, no other proportions are as high as sport, which belongs to approximately 72%, followed by science with merely 18%. Meanwhile, drawing makes up the least significant number with just 8%.
While
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 the interest topics of drawing in
school
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 A is the lowest percentage, there is the highest
that
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apply
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for
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number in
school
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 B.
Moreover
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, math takes up about 12%. With regard to
school
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 B, an overwhelming majority of drawing with 50%.
At
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 the opposite of the scale, the trivial part constituted science with negligibly 5%.
On the contrary
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, the second noticeable proportion of literature with just 37%. The others can be grouped into
ranger
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rangers
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 from 10 to 20%.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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