The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000

The maps below show the changes that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780, 1860 and 2000
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The pictures demonstrate what changes a town called Willington faced in the years 1780, 1860 and 2000.
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it is clear that
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a vast majority of the town’s green space has been used for utilization, which includes an accumulated number of villages, shops, schools and houses. Focusing on 1780 and 1860,
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to a decline in the number of farms from 4 to 2 in the region, a huge reduction of the forests and woods is noticeable.
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, in 1860 Few attempts to make passage easier were made, including the construction of a road to just the north of the farms,from the river to villages,
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a bridge on top of the river. Moving on to 2000, the most significant difference is the whole demolition of the forest, making way for the establishment of 3 sports fields, 2 schools and a road from
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site to the villages.
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, the number of houses built increased to 500 accommodations and
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, 5 shops were manufactured near the river, which is located to the north of the newly built wetland for birds.
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