The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given map illustrates before and after images of the same island

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being built for some tourist facilities. On the first map, we can see an empty land surrounded by sea with few coconut trees which is approximately 200m in length and includes a beach on the west. The second map shows us the same island after the developments. Developers didn't harm any trees or nature

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they were doing construction.

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they built some accommodations which are connected by footpath near the beach and centre of the land. There is a restaurant in the north and reception in the centre.A vehicle track can be seen around the reception which leads to the restaurant and to the pier.

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, visitors can swim near the beach and go for boat rides in the south sea of the island.

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it can be noticed there are considerable alterations to make

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land in order to attract tourists. And

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they have plenty of resources and activities to do upon their return.

P.Erandi Mon Dec 25 2023

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Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

170 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

before and after
transformation
infrastructure
natural features
network of cottages
footpaths
recreational areas
pristine environment
organized lodging facilities
strategically positioned
delineated pathways
untouched nature
accessibility
isolated island experience
enhanced transportation options

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Natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

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Some people say that now we can see the films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.