The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates before and after images of the same island
that is
being built for some tourist facilities. On the first map, we can see an empty land surrounded by sea with few coconut trees which is approximately 200m in length and includes a beach on the west. The second map shows us the same island after the developments. Developers didn't harm any trees or nature
while
they were doing construction.
However
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they built some accommodations which are connected by footpath near the beach and centre of the land. There is a restaurant in the north and reception in the centre.A vehicle track can be seen around the reception which leads to the restaurant and to the pier.
Also
, visitors can swim near the beach and go for boat rides in the south sea of the island.
Overall
it can be noticed there are considerable alterations to make
this
land in order to attract tourists. And
also
they have plenty of resources and activities to do upon their return.
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