The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the average cost change monthly for Copper, Nickel, and Zinc in 2014.
After analyzing it can be seen clearly that, In January, Nickel was 6% which drastically fell to 1% in March and in June became negative. Copper
prices
also
decreased monthly. Whereas
Zinc prices
rose by 2% in February. However
, it did not go far because the price trend was making a lower pattern.
In June, the metal prices
are substantially stable till September. Furthermore
, there is also
a slight downfall but it gets support from the market. At the end
of December, the fluctuation of the prices
were almost very close to each other Copper Nickel, and Zinc were at nearly 1%, 1.5%, and 25 respectivelySubmitted by hadiashahid331 on
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