the line chart shows the results of survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The line graph demonstrates the survey results that show the reasons why citizens tended to move to a specific country's capital city from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
, the figure which had the most increase from the starting point was employment, Linking Words
whereas
; the advanture figure experienced a decline in the total of emigrated people.
As the graph illustrates, the main reason that affected the increase in the number of people who moved to the capital city was because of employment which experienced just above sixty Linking Words
thousand
in 2000 until it reached approximately eighty-five Use synonyms
thousand
in 2005. Use synonyms
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it grew slightly to just above Linking Words
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ninety
thousand
in 2010. Afterwards, it underwent a slow decrease between the five years to just under ninety Use synonyms
thousand
, from 2010 to 2015. Use synonyms
Moreover
, the second reason was the study. The citizens' number increased gradually from about Linking Words
twinty-five
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ninety-five
thousand
to under ninety Use synonyms
thousand
during the fifteen years.
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While
the number of people who sought to adventure remained constant with a slight growth which could not be seen. It grew from ten Linking Words
thousand
to just above it during the fifteen years.Use synonyms
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