You have just spent a holiday with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Thank your friend for the holiday Explain that you left your wallet in their house Give them instructions of how to send it back to you

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Dear Mike, I hope

this

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letter finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to express my feelings about the

last

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holiday

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, I spent at your place

as well as

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wallet

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, which I left at your home. First and foremost, I would like to give you thanks for allowing me to spend a wonderful

holiday

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at your house

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week. The

overall

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holiday

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was memorable as after a long time, we spent quality time. During

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holiday

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, I experienced cultural diversity and delicious food.

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, I would like to inform you that I left my

wallet

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at your house, which I realized after coming home.

This

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wallet

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is in black and made with cowhide. Some important business cards

as well as

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debit/credit are kept inside the

wallet

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. I am requesting you to search

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wallet

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whether it's available at your house or not. If

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wallet

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is found at your home, please send me back to my permanent address i.e. Kamal Mansion, Akmol Ali Road, Chittagong. I will pay the courier service fee. You can directly reach me for any query by my contact number, 01797577699. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding

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matter. Yours lovingly, Faisal

faisalmahamoodTue Dec 26 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and purpose. The paragraph about the wallet could be more concise.

task achievement

Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. The phrase 'radiant health' seems a bit too formal for a letter to a friend.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

210 words

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