The table below gives information about population in Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given table provides the total
population
in unit
of Fix the agreement mistake
units
millions
and the proportion of gender, birth rate, average annual population
growth and people aged over 65 in Australia
and Malaysia
in the years 1980 and 2002.
In general, in the same period of time, both countries witnessed a significant increase in the total population
. Furthermore
, the percentages of two
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the two
gender
in Fix the agreement mistake
genders
two
countries did not nearly change. Meanwhile, the birthrate tended to slight decrease and the Correct article usage
the two
aging
Change the spelling
ageing
population
rose.
You can see more detail from the table, in the same passage of 22-year time
, the total Correct your spelling
22 years
population
in Australia
experience
a rise Wrong verb form
experienced
for
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of
millions
. Meanwhile, Change to singular
million
this
figure
was nearly doubled, with 13.7 millions
in 1980 and 24.3 Change to singular
million
millions
in 2002. Interestingly, the percentage of both genders in Change to singular
million
Australia
stayed the same in the period, with 49.0 % and 50.1%, for male
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the male
population
and female population
, perspectively
. In Replace the word
respectively
Malaysia
, the male population
rose by 0.3%, but the figure
for female
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the female
population
fell by 0.3%.
The birthrate in Australia
and Malaysia
experienced a
unnoticeable rise to 0.2% and 0.1%, Change the article
an
perspectively
. Replace the word
respectively
Although
the proportion of average annual population
growth in Australia
witnessed insignificant
increase, Add an article
an insignificant
this
figure
in Malaysia
dropped slightly to 0.3%. The percentage of senior
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the senior
population
in Australia
rose by 2.8%, which was almost 5 times differential
rate Add an article
the differential
the
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from the
figure
for Malaysia
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