The pie chart below shows information on the highest level of education of women in Someland in 1945 and 1995
The pie chart illustrates the information on the highest level of education of
women
in Someland between 1945 and 1995.
Overall
, it is clearly observed that the percentage of women
who completed their first degree and postgraduate diploma escalated by the year 1995 . And it could be clearly seen that there was a big change in all the other categories, except for the year 9 group.
It is obvious that in 1945, the rate of women
who did not go to school was up to exactly 35%, which was the highest figure in the whole pie chart. An equal rate was recorded in the third-grade sort. In contrast
, postgraduate was at the bottom of the list of seven qualifications because no females kept going to school after they had graduated.
In 1995, thanks to a dramatic escalation, ,
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in Someland with 50%. A sharp increase was also
witnessed in the 12th and postgraduate groups. In contrast
, the ratio of women
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