The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
this
line chart illustrates numerous of
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apply
crimes
such
as; armed robbery , assault and murder where
happened in London Correct word choice
which
from
2003 and throughout 10 years.
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in
Overall
, the total number
crime
of A.R Change preposition
of crime
were
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was
the
significant Change the article
apply
at
the whole span, Change preposition
in
while
, assault
was Add an article
an assault
the assault
the
half Correct article usage
apply
comparing
to Wrong verb form
compared
previous
one, the letter was Correct article usage
the previous
murder
which Add an article
a murder
reach
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reached
to
the lowest Change preposition
apply
number
in the period.
To begin
, majority
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the majority
crime
was AR in 2004 Change preposition
of crime
was
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apply
reach
its peak Wrong verb form
reaching
about
3700, before Change preposition
at about
substantial
dropping was 1000 in 2008, Correct article usage
a substantial
following
by Wrong verb form
followed
Correct article usage
a slightly
slightly increased
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slight increase
by
500 Change preposition
of
crimes
were stable in
three years later.
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apply
Moreover
, assault starting
by approximately 2300 and Wrong verb form
started
following
the Verb problem
apply
number
of crimes
dropped by 500 crimes
in 2006 thus
, fluctuant increased to reached
the highest Change the form of the verb
reach
number
was
about 2600 Unnecessary verb
apply
crimes
in the final period.
Regarding to
the chart, murder was Remove the preposition
apply
insignificant
Add an article
the insignificant
an insignificant
number
of crimes
except in 2005 the total of people was killed around 1000.Submitted by M on
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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