The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Panama City from 2010 to 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
this
line chart illustrates numerous
of
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crimes
such
as; armed robbery , assault and murder
where
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happened in London
from
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2003 and throughout 10 years.
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, the total
number
crime
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of A.R
were
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the
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significant
at
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the whole span,
while
,
assault
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an assault
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was
the
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half
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to
previous
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one, the letter was
murder
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a murder
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which
reach
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to
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the lowest
number
in the period.
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,
majority
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crime
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was AR in 2004
was
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reach
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its peak
about
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3700, before
substantial
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dropping was 1000 in 2008,
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by
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a slightly
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slightly increased
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by
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500
crimes
were stable
in
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three years later.
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, assault
starting
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by approximately 2300 and
following
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the
number
of
crimes
dropped by 500
crimes
in 2006
thus
, fluctuant increased to
reached
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the highest
number
was
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about 2600
crimes
in the final period. Regarding
to
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the chart, murder was
insignificant
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the insignificant
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number
of
crimes
except in 2005 the total of people was killed around 1000.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crimes, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Crime rates
  • Fluctuated
  • Significant spike
  • Consistent trend
  • Prevalent
  • Cumulative change
  • Enforcement
  • Correlate
  • Reduction/increase in crime
  • Categories of crime
  • Level of crime
  • Period of time
  • Analysis
  • Data representation
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