the chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025
the bar chart depicts the data of
southland's
export projects in three different periods Capitalize word
Southland's
started
in 2000 to 2023 and a prediction Wrong verb form
starting
in
2025. Change preposition
for
this
information has been calibrated in billions
. overall
, it is clearly seen that international tourism rose
over Wrong verb form
has risen
the
time. in Correct article usage
apply
contras
, meat products declined.
first and foremost, international tourism experienced an Correct your spelling
contrast
increasing
in three different years. Replace the word
increase
in addition
, in 2000 the
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apply
export
gained 8 Fix the agreement mistake
exports
billions
, Change to singular
billion
after
that Correct word choice
and after
it
kept increasing to Correct pronoun usage
apply
near
9 Change the word
nearly
billions
and expecting approximately 9,9 Change to singular
billion
billions
in 2025. Change to singular
billion
moreover
, dairy items saw a fluctuation, at the beginning the total amount of money was 6,8 billions
. after 23 years, it Change to singular
billion
inclined
to 9,9 Verb problem
increased
billions
and fell to 9,5 Change to singular
billion
billions
respectively. Change to singular
billion
furthermore
, meat products dropped slowly at the moment. in the year of
2000, the total export was 6 Change preposition
apply
billions
. after that, it declined to 5,5 Change to singular
billion
billions
and to 5 Change to singular
billion
billions
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billion
at the end
of period
.
to draw the conclusion, the peak moment of each Add an article
the period
sources
was international tourism in 2000 and 2025. Change to a singular noun
source
however
, 2023 reached a peak in dairy products in
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apply
total
of Add an article
a total
near
10 Change the word
nearly
billions
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billion
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