The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
The chart shows information that in 2009, the highest number of attendance at entertainment venues
is
the number of Wrong verb form
was
people
going to the cinemas. One of the reasons why alot
of Correct your spelling
a lot
people
prefer to watch the cinema in
because the Correct your spelling
is
ticket
cost is cheaper compared to admission ticket
price
for other entertainment activities. The Fix the agreement mistake
prices
ticket
price for one person is $15 and if someone decide
to Change the verb form
decides
brought
more Change the verb
bring
people
with them, there is a discount available where tickets for 4 people
the ticket
only costs
$55.
The chart Correct subject-verb agreement
cost
also
shows that there's sports event
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events
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
also
a popular event
but the number of attendance to
the Change preposition
at
game
is very low. Fix the agreement mistake
games
Due to
the fact, that 2009
football game admission Correct article usage
the 2009
ticket
Fix the agreement mistake
tickets
is
more expensive rather than Correct subject-verb agreement
are
movies
or theme Fix the agreement mistake
movie
parks
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park tickets
ticket
.
We can conclude, that the most popular entertainment event
in 2009 is
watching movies in the cinema. Following that, there are Wrong verb form
was
also
people
who took interest
Correct article usage
an interest
on
theme Change preposition
in
park
and sports Fix the agreement mistake
parks
event
.Fix the agreement mistake
events
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, ticket, event with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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