The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.
The two pie charts draw the conclusion of tourist's pros ( the
people
, the scenery, good accommodation and culture) and cons ( weather, high cost of living, entertainment and food quality) whilst visiting Bowen Use synonyms
Island
. The proportions are given in percentages.
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Overall
, most visitors reported the Linking Words
people
as the biggest advantage of travelling to Bowen Use synonyms
Island
, whilst stating the largest disadvantage was the high cost of living.
Boasting an impressive two-fifths, it was concluded that the Use synonyms
people
Use synonyms
was
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were
largest
reason to go to the Change the article
the largest
island
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the scenery was Linking Words
also
ranked high accounting for over one-third of the Linking Words
overall
advantages of the place. The remaining reasons to visit the Linking Words
island
were good accommodation and culture with 11% and 12% respectively.
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High
cost of living represents the most popular disadvantage representing one-half of the Correct article usage
The high
people
's results. Use synonyms
Additionally
, entertainment accounts for one-quarter of the cons described by tourists. Linking Words
Furthermore
, weather and food quality both represent 10% Linking Words
each
of the reasons not to go to the Change preposition
of each
island
.Use synonyms
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