The pie charts below show the most common advantages and disadvantages of Bowen Island, according to a survey of visitors.

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The two pie charts draw the conclusion of tourist's pros ( the

people

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, the scenery, good accommodation and culture) and cons ( weather, high cost of living, entertainment and food quality) whilst visiting Bowen

Island

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. The proportions are given in percentages.

Overall

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, most visitors reported the

people

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as the biggest advantage of travelling to Bowen

Island

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, whilst stating the largest disadvantage was the high cost of living. Boasting an impressive two-fifths, it was concluded that the

people

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was

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were

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largest

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the largest

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reason to go to the

island

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Similarly

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, the scenery was

also

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ranked high accounting for over one-third of the

overall

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advantages of the place. The remaining reasons to visit the

island

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were good accommodation and culture with 11% and 12% respectively.

High

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The high

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cost of living represents the most popular disadvantage representing one-half of the

people

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's results.

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, entertainment accounts for one-quarter of the cons described by tourists.

Furthermore

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, weather and food quality both represent 10%

each

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of each

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of the reasons not to go to the

island

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, island with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "represents" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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5
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

164 words

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