The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.
The given charts depict the prices of various entertainment
as well as
the attendance of each entertainment in the year 2009. Looking from an Linking Words
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that there are five different Linking Words
events
Use synonyms
while
the attendance list Linking Words
are
only representing three segments.
Looking more closely at the data, we can see that among Change the verb form
is
of
all Change preposition
apply
events
, football games Use synonyms
has
the most expensive prices, Correct subject-verb agreement
have
whereas
the price range is started from $71 to $298. Followed by theme Linking Words
parks
admission price Change noun form
parks'
park's
that
costs $71 per Correct pronoun usage
which
one
person. Correct pronoun usage
apply
On the other hand
, there are basketball and cricket games that Linking Words
costs
respectively around $34 and 10 Change the verb form
cost
dollar
cheaper for one voucher, at the same time, the cheapest ticket to get in to is the cinema and Change to a plural noun
dollars
its
exactly $15.
The other chart shows the amount of Correct your spelling
it is
each
Change to a genitive case
the attendance of each event
each event's attendance
events
attendance which was dominated by the Use synonyms
cinemas
audience with over Change to a genitive case
cinema's
cinemas'
than
1000 people, Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
subsequently
the theme parks Add a comma
subsequently,
was
attended with over Change the verb form
were
than
200 people, and the least attended Change preposition
apply
events
Use synonyms
was
sports Change the verb form
were
that
was statistically lower than that.
To draw the conclusion, the prices that Correct pronoun usage
which
was
given Change the verb form
were
has
a crucial role Correct subject-verb agreement
have
to let
people decide which event to Change preposition
in letting
attends
Wrong verb form
attend
to
.Change preposition
apply
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