You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Some people believe that one of the best ways to solve environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Increasing
cost
of Correct article usage
the cost
fuel
is not the best ways
to solve environmental problems Fix the agreement mistake
way
according to
my opinion.
In countries like India, where the major
Correct your spelling
majority of
population
belongs to Correct article usage
the population
middle
/upper Correct article usage
the middle
middle
class
, increasing fuel
cost
might affect the Fix the agreement mistake
costs
countries
financial situation.
A major population of India belongs to Change noun form
country's
middle
Correct article usage
the middle
class
whose major mode
of transport
to work
is motorbike or car
. Increasing fuel
price
will impact working Fix the agreement mistake
prices
people
making them compromise by either paying more for fuel
or choosing a public mode
of transport
for travelling to work
. This
will further
impact the quality of work
and living for a very large number of employees.
Decreasing quality
of Correct article usage
the quality
work
will inturn
impact Correct your spelling
in turn
Correct article usage
the nations
nations
financial stability.
There are many other ways to tackle environmental problems in Change noun form
nations'
nation's
todays
Change to a genitive case
today's
generations
. The world is moving towards electric vehicles. Fix the agreement mistake
generation
Government
can encourage Correct article usage
The government
people
to buy electric vehicles instead
of the
vehicles that consume Correct article usage
apply
non renewable
Add a hyphen
non-renewable
energies
to run. Government schemes like zero percentage road tax, Fix the agreement mistake
energy
zero
percentage registration fees can be made available to target Correct word choice
and zero
Correct article usage
the middle
middle
Add a hyphen
middle-class
class
population.
Vehicle taxes can be increased on luxury cars
and bikes to target upper
Correct article usage
the upper
class
to switch from non electric
Add a hyphen
non-electric
mode
of Fix the agreement mistake
modes
transport
to electric mode
of Fix the agreement mistake
modes
transport
.
More electric charging stations can be built so as to increase the use of electric cars
in the country. Such
measures will motivate people
to choose electric cars
/bikes instead
.
I recently purchased a non electric four wheeler
. Even though I wanted to opt for an electric Add a hyphen
non-electric four-wheeler
car
, I was unable to do so due to
high
Correct article usage
the high
pricing
of the Replace the word
price
car
and insurance expenses. The maintainance
of the Correct your spelling
maintenance
car
was also
quite expensive which eventually forced me into buying a fuel based
Add a hyphen
fuel-based
car
. If only the electric cars
in market
Add an article
the market
are
listed at an affordable price, many Wrong verb form
were
people
would defenitely
move to Correct your spelling
definitely
electric
Add an article
an electric
mode
of transport
without any hassle.
To conclude
, there are alternate ways to improve current environmental problems than increasing fuel
prices for cars
and other modes of transport
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Task Achievement
Your essay attempts to tackle the question, but you need to develop a clear position throughout the essay. Your opinion seems to be apparent but not thoroughly justified with comprehensive supportive arguments and relevant examples.
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- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
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