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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say this is a positive trend, while others argue that it leads to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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The development of
technology
 in
this
 era encourages the massive usage of
computers
 in every sector of our life including education. Half of the population stands with the positive impact of
computers
 including laptops and iPads
while
 others believe
this
 trend will lead to negative effects on students’ performances. In my opinion,
this
technology
 will bring positive changes in the advancement of education. Nowadays, the growth of the tech era can not be denied.
Technology
 helps mankind to get done their work easily no exception in educational things. The academic world
also
 feels the sense that
technology
 is beneficial.
Firstly
, the Internet can be accessed through our
computers
 providing us with various resources for learning like videos and online journals or articles.
Secondly
, using online platforms will broaden our interaction with each other to collaborate and interact.
For instance
, when the whole world was locked down during COVID-19, all of the class was conducted online by utilizing Zoom or Google Meet. It can not be run without automation.
Thirdly
, another benefit of
technology
 is reducing cost and time consumption in submitting students’s assignments. We are no longer using paper and going offline to submit the assignment. It all can be done within our
computers
.
On the other hand
,
technology
 is not just bringing the good side. It
also
 comes with several considerations
due to
 the time consuming
while
 using
computers
. Game or social media on students’s
computers
 might interrupt their concentration. Stearing
computers
 for hours has side effects on human health especially the eyes
due to
 radiation from
computers
’s displays.
In addition
, access to artificial intelligence has the potential to reduce students’ creativity
due to
 the easy ways to get the answer to every question of their homework. In conclusion, half of the majority offended these devices because of health issues, focus and creativity of students may be reduced. On the other side, the accessibility of learning materials, ease of communication with others,
also
 time and costs are reduced. These are the prior considerations to be involved with
technology
 despite the disadvantages it brings.
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introduction
Ensure that the introduction clearly presents the topic and outlines the structure of the essay without stating 'in my opinion' too early.
cohesion
Use a wider range of cohesive devices to link ideas more smoothly and avoid repetition of phrases like 'on the other hand'.
paragraphing
Paragraphs should be evenly developed; some are currently more detailed than others.
conclusion
The conclusion should succinctly summarize the main points without introducing new arguments; ensure it clearly reflects the discussion in the main body.
task response
Stay unbiased and discuss both views equally before stating your position in the conclusion.
examples
Use specific examples to support points; general statements such as 'due to the time consuming while using computers' need further elaboration.
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