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The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the most popular fast food that was eaten in Melbourne at three different times.
Overall
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, Hamburger was the highest type of food eaten by Melbourne's citizens;
however
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, noodles were the lowest. In 2005, most people were inclined to eat
hamburger
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 with 40
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. The fried chicken was
also
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 high at 35
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 compared to the three other types of cuisine which were on average 5.5
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. Nowadays, the number of individuals who purchase hamburgers has declined to 38
units
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, which is near
to
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the amount of fried chicken at 37.
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, people who tried salad was significantly increased by 15
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. Fried rice and noodles have eaten 9 and 8
units
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 respectively. In 2025, three major types of fast food will predict an increase which are hamburger 52, fried chicken 45, and salads more than double 41
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.
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, fried rice remained stable at 9 and noodles slowly increased at 9
units
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Vocabulary: Replace the words units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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