two maps below show the changes of island

two maps below show the changes of island
IELTS Writing Task Chart for two maps below show the changes of island
The
island
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is approximately 250 meters long, has palm trees dotted around it, is surrounded by ocean and has a beach to the west. Over the period, the
island
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was completely transformed with the addition of a hotel and a pier;
however
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, the eastern part of the
island
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appears to have been left undeveloped. The most noticeable additions are the hotel rooms. 6 buildings, surrounding some trees, have been built in the west of the
island
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, and 9 buildings have been constructed in the
center
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centre
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of the
island
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. A reception building and a restaurant have been developed between the two accommodation areas. A pier has
also
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been built on the
island
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’s south coast, allowing yachts access to the resort. Apart from the trees, the beach remains the only natural feature to remain relatively untouched;
however
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, it appears to be used for swimming.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "remains" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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