You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter: ● Describe what you enjoyed about the course ● Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course ● Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer

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Dear Scolfit My full name is Uyg'un Parpiyev. I am studying in your cookery school. I really like
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Linking Words

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course. I
take
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have

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enough information about cookery and My family members
proud
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are proud

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from
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of

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me. To be honest. I feel comfortable in my kitchen,
becouse Im
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because I

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every day cooking different meals.
Last
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day I
had
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apply

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prepared pizza through
teached
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taught

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information
yours
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your

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cookery school.
This
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pizza
special
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is special

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for my friends.
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day I had
take
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taken

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offer work
bosphorus
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Bosphorus

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restourant
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restaurant

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restourant
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restaurant

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have
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has

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got different tasty victual from
menu
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the menu

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Furthermore
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, I appreciate all of your school's organisation preparing
such
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a perfect course. I'd love to stay in touch. I am waiting for your new course to attend as soon possible.
While
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I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my email as soon as possible. I will be waiting to hear from you. If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me. Yours
sinceerely
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sincerely

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Uyg'un

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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that the ideas follow logically from one to the next.
Coherence & Cohesion
Include a proper greeting and sign-off to maintain a consistent structure appropriate for a letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively; each paragraph should focus on a single idea that relates directly to the questions asked in the task.
Task Achievement
Fully address all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail in your letter to cover each point adequately.
Task Achievement
Maintain a suitable tone throughout the letter; it should be appropriately formal or informal depending on the context of the task.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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