You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter: ● Describe what you enjoyed about the course ● Say how much cooking you’ve done since the course ● Suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer
Dear Scolfit
My full name is Uyg'un Parpiyev. I am studying in your cookery school. I really like
this
course. I take
enough information about cookery and My family members Verb problem
have
proud
Add a missing verb
are proud
from
me.
To be honest. I feel comfortable in my kitchen, Change preposition
of
becouse Im
every day cooking different meals. Correct your spelling
because I
Last
day I had
prepared pizza through Unnecessary verb
apply
teached
information Correct your spelling
taught
yours
cookery school. Correct the word
your
This
pizza special
for my friends. Add a missing verb
is special
Last
day I had take
offer workChange the form of the verb
taken
bosphorus
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Bosphorus
restourant
. Correct your spelling
restaurant
This
restourant
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restaurant
have
got different tasty victual from Correct subject-verb agreement
has
menu
.
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the menu
Furthermore
, I appreciate all of your school's organisation preparing such
a perfect course. I'd love to stay in touch. I am waiting for your new course to attend as soon possible.
While
I await your positive feedback, I would be grateful if you could reply to my email as soon as possible. I will be waiting to hear from you.
If you have any questions or thoughts, please do not hesitate to contact me.
Yours sinceerely
Uyg'unCorrect your spelling
sincerely
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Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear main idea and that the ideas follow logically from one to the next.
Coherence & Cohesion
Include a proper greeting and sign-off to maintain a consistent structure appropriate for a letter.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use paragraphs effectively; each paragraph should focus on a single idea that relates directly to the questions asked in the task.
Task Achievement
Fully address all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail in your letter to cover each point adequately.
Task Achievement
Maintain a suitable tone throughout the letter; it should be appropriately formal or informal depending on the context of the task.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,