The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts represent six electronic instruments which are mobile

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, desktop

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, flat-screen

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and conventional

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used by 18 to 25 aged people for watching

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in two different years 2009 and 2019 in Canada.

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, the proportion of conducting tools

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significantly changed in these two years.

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use of conventional

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and desktop

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decreased and the other three components

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increased in 2019. In 2009 the

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of conventional

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was 34%

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in 2019 the

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of it went down

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4%.

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is the most dramatic fall here. The percentage of using

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was 20% in 2009 and it fell to 12% in 2019.

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, in 2009 the proportion of practicing desktop

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was 18% percent and it just

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to 12% in 2019. In

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contrast, the proportion of using mobile

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in 2009 was only 15% but in 2019 it went up to 26%. There is

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increase in

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, which saw a rise from 5% in 2009 to 19% in 2019. The biggest increment was in flat-screen

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, which was 8% in 2009 and it jumped to 27% in 2019.

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of all six electronic tools

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changed from 2009 to 2019. Mobile

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and flat-screen

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were getting peak from 2009 to 2019

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rest

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of the instruments

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fall

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