The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts represent six electronic instruments which are mobile
phone
, Fix the agreement mistake
phones
laptop
, Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
tablet
, desktop Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
computer
, flat-screen Fix the agreement mistake
computers
TV
and conventional Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
TV
used by 18 to 25 aged people for watching Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
TV
in two different years 2009 and 2019 in Canada. Overall
, the proportion of conducting tools are
significantly changed in these two years. Verb problem
has
While the
use of conventional Correct word choice
The
TV
, laptop
and desktop Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
computer
Fix the agreement mistake
computers
are
decreased and the other three components Unnecessary verb
apply
are
increased in 2019.
In 2009 the Unnecessary verb
apply
uses
of conventional Fix the agreement mistake
use
TV
was 34% where
in 2019 the Correct word choice
whereas
uses
of it went down Fix the agreement mistake
use
at
4%. Change preposition
to
This
is the most dramatic fall here. The percentage of using laptop
was 20% in 2009 and it fell to 12% in 2019. Fix the agreement mistake
laptops
Additionally
, in 2009 the proportion of practicing desktop computer
was 18% percent and it just Fix the agreement mistake
computers
drop
to 12% in 2019.
In Wrong verb form
dropped
the
contrast, the proportion of using mobile Correct article usage
apply
phone
in 2009 was only 15% but in 2019 it went up to 26%. There is Fix the agreement mistake
phones
also
a
increase in Change the article
an
using
Wrong verb form
the use of
tablet
, which saw a rise from 5% in 2009 to 19% in 2019. The biggest increment was in flat-screen Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
TV
, which was 8% in 2009 and it jumped to 27% in 2019.
To conclude
, practicing
of all six electronic tools Wrong verb form
the practice
are
changed from 2009 to 2019. Mobile Verb problem
has
phone
, Fix the agreement mistake
phones
tablet
and flat-screen Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
TV
were getting peak from 2009 to 2019 where
Correct word choice
while
rest
of the instruments Correct article usage
the rest
got
Verb problem
apply
fall
.Replace the word
fell
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