The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar shows a comparison of
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menu in Add an article
an ordered
the ordered
Winter
and Correct article usage
the Winter
Summer
Seasons at Brisk Cafe.
Overall
, we can see that average daily sales
varies
among Correct subject-verb agreement
vary
five
menus in Correct article usage
the five
Summer
, but not in Winter
. People tend to pick hot coffee when the winter
comes.
Looking at the graph closely, hot coffee is the most favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
things
in Fix the agreement mistake
thing
Winter
. It is clear that
the total sales
of that menu reach the peak at more than 70. Not only that, but soup is also
being
the best seller menu in Unnecessary verb
apply
Winter
. Meanwhile in
the other side, iced coffee becomes the Change preposition
on
lowest ordered
food which is almost no Add a hyphen
lowest-ordered
sales
, but things become different in Summer
when the servings number of it increase to it is highest level. Beside
that, ice cream is the people's second Replace the word
Besides
choices
in Fix the agreement mistake
choice
Summer
. It is shown at
the Change preposition
on
day by day
servings that more than 30 Add a hyphen
day-by-day
order
. Fix the agreement mistake
orders
In addition
, if we look to
other menus, there is Salad that Change preposition
at
have
no changes in Change the verb form
has
sales
whether it is winter
or summer
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Vocabulary: Replace the words winter, summer, sales with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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