The graph below shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe by season. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar shows a comparison of

ordered

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an ordered

the ordered

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menu in

Winter

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the Winter

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and

Summer

Seasons at Brisk Cafe.

Overall

, we can see that average daily

sales

varies

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vary

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among

five

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the five

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menus in

Summer

, but not in

Winter

. People tend to pick hot coffee when the

winter

comes. Looking at the graph closely, hot coffee is the most

favorite

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favourite

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things

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thing

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Winter

It is clear that

the total

sales

of that menu reach the peak at more than 70. Not only that, but soup is

also

being

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the best seller menu in

Winter

. Meanwhile

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the other side, iced coffee becomes the

lowest ordered

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lowest-ordered

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food which is almost no

sales

, but things become different in

Summer

when the servings number of it increase to it is highest level.

Beside

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that, ice cream is the people's second

choices

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choice

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Summer

. It is shown

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show examples

the

day by day

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day-by-day

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servings that more than 30

order

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orders

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In addition

, if we look

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other menus, there is Salad that

have

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has

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no changes in

sales

whether it is

winter

summer

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Vocabulary: Replace the words winter, summer, sales with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

172 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

average daily sales
selected food items
seasonal variation
popular
peak
consumer preferences
anomalies
transition seasons
trends
comfort food
beverage
snack
consume
highlight
fluctuations
correspond
plummet
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