The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the changes in the layout of

library

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the library

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over the

5 years

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5-year

period.

Overall

it is clear that

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there have been several developments in

structure

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the structure

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library

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the library

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, with adding new genres and providing computers. One

intersting

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interesting

fact is that

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the figure for types of excebition which we can see right-hand and opposite side after

pass

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throw

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through

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the entrance has been increased and

area

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of fiction has been replaced by children's books.

Then

developers

have

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added

children's

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a children's

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area between

place

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of children's books and tables.

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entrance

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zone

remain

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the same

such

door

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the door

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, desk and stairs. Noticeably, amount of tables has been decreased to 4 from 8 and altered to longer ones.

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, the place for newspapers and periodicals was removed and added exhibition

corner

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for films and DVDs. Developers who have

redesign

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the library

also

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added

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2 computers to its

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southwest

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south west

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side

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

comparison
significant changes
modernize
technological facilities
computer stations
digital book borrowing
interactive learning
family-friendly spaces
cafe or lounge area
social interaction
open spaces
flexible seating arrangements
collaborative work
community events

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The map shows the comparison of changes in the library before and after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer. Do you think advantages of this development outweight its disadvantages

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