Beside a lot of advantages, some people believe that internet create many problems. To what extent you agree or disagree?
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facilities
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people
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agree
the view and will explain the reasons behind my opinion in Add the preposition
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essay.
Firstly
, students experience academic drowbacks
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drawbacks
due to
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In other words
, young people
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internet
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the internet
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on
prolong
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as well as
their health. For instance
, varieties of social medias
and online gaming are emerging today where students spend their valuable time Correct your spelling
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Therefore
, they are not only wasting the
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also
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on
educational goals.
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Secondly
, some people
highly trust the trend of online-shopping
and spend their money to buy the Correct your spelling
online shopping
products
without analysing the quality of it. That is
to say, either many fake online shops recieve
money without delivering the Correct your spelling
receive
products
to buyers or selling
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low quality
items in a fixed price range. Add a hyphen
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example
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example,
buy
a dress from Change the verb form
buys
online-shopping
, probably that person Correct your spelling
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get
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people
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products
which we can buy from
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online
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this
, even though enhanced internet services make our life easier, many students and other people
are facing issues due to
low focus on studies, unreliability of products
and wasting money for
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