You are living in an English speaking country and the restaurant near you is making a lot of noise. Write a letter to the restaurant owner. Cover the following: - tell restaurant owner to reduce the noise levels. - suggest a solution to fix the problem. - warn that if this problem remains not solved then further action will be taken

Dear Sir/Madam Hope
this
letter finds you well and you are in good health and in high spirits.I am writing
this
letter to express my complaint which I encountered
last
night
while
sleeping . Well,my name is Navdeep and I live in an apartment which is just beside your restaurant .On
last
day I believe there is a late-night party at your place and the volume of music is very loud.
Therefore
, I
could
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not able to sleep on time .
Hence
, I woke up late and reached the office late .
Furthermore
, in order to overcome
this
problem, I would suggest some possible solutions to you.
Firstly
, you should restrict late-night parties because as per city administration rules restaurants should have to close their premises after midnight .
Besides
that, the volume of sound should be
in limit
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.
In addition
to
this
, I am
also
giving strict warning to your restaurant workers if they do not follow city guidelines I will be going to
registered
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a complaint in police against them if I faced these problems again in future. Looking forward to hearing a positive response from your side. With best regards, Navdeep
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Coherence and Cohesion
Use clearer paragraphing to ensure each idea is distinct and logically ordered.
Task Achievement
Make sure to tone down the language for warnings, maintaining formality and politeness.
Task Achievement
The letter covers all the key points: request, solution, and warning.
Coherence and Cohesion
The greeting and closing are polite and appropriate for a formal letter.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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