73.The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

73.The map below shows a park and its surroundings in 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps illustrate changes in the layout of the park over the period from 1980 to today.
Overall
,
it is clear that
there have been several developments in the structure of the park, with adding some new facilities and redesigning paths which pass through the area.
To begin
, as can be seen from the map, flowers located on the right side and left side of the south gate have been removed and
added
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new objects;
for
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the former,
it
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has been replaced with a playground,
while
the latter has been altered with the brush.
Additionally
,
while
the space of the trees has been reduced, developers added new records
such
as chairs , desks and barbecue.
On the other hand
, there were 2 entrances in the south and in the west with gates to the public garden, which have been increased to 4.
Then
, the roads have been made from the south to the north and from the east to the west field.
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