The chart below shows local expenditure in 2010 and 2015.

The chart below shows local expenditure in 2010 and 2015.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart below shows local expenditure in 2010 and 2015.
The chart depicts local spending in 2010 and 2015.
Overall
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,It is explicit that all types of
expenditure
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were decreased in 2015 as compared to 2010 except
expenditure
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on welfare, and interest on borrowing. In detail,the portion of spending on welfare was 8% in 2010,It increased to 13% in 2015.Authorities frittering on interest on borrowing percentage was 5% in 2010 as compared to 10% in 2015,Its proportion
projected
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upward. The government spent 17% on defence in 2010,which declined significantly to 14% in the year of 2015.Education has a major portion of spending with 24% of the total budget in 2010;It dropped to 21% in 2015.But remained in the first place.Health care
expenditure
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stood at second place after education, its percentage of both mentioned years 2010 and 2015,was 21% and 20%.Spending percentage on transport and culture
also
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declined from 3% (2010) to 1% (2015) and 2%(2010) to 1%(2015) respectively.
However
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have
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the same proportion of
expenditure
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in both years 2010 and 2015,
It
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apply
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was 19%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words expenditure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Expenditure
  • Categories
  • Trends
  • Demographics
  • Economic factors
  • Cultural factors
  • Digital services
  • E-commerce
  • Inflation rates
  • Unemployment levels
  • GDP growth
  • Consumer confidence
  • Spending habits
  • Healthcare
  • Entertainment
  • Housing
  • Food
  • Transportation
  • Education
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