Some people think that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

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it is thought that

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university

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degree is crucial in order to gain success, other people believe in recent times it is not vital anymore.

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education

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can sometimes be useful in life, in my opinion, learning a skill

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of

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is more important.

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a mixed blessing requires

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examinations

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a wider context. On the one hand, it is mistakenly alleged that academic instruction would turn an individual

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a better person who completely knows how to achieve anything.

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assumption claims that

university

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lessons have the answer for each question and the best solution for each problem can be found there. One reason for

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the variety of the lessons

learning

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by students; they ought to study

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a huge number of different subjects, so some might think it would broaden their horizons which is too optimistical to

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practical. To achieve a clear picture;

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matter needs to be seen on

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canvas.

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, some people do not choose

university

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education

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as the best way to become successful because of the financial risks it can cause and

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agree. The salient point to note here is that spending at least four years in the

university

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can bring about many problems.

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, the person who enters

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college and

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the

university

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has never had the chance to learn any skills and could not earn money during

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time.

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, someone who seeks to enter

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the job market after finishing high school and beside that try to be

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an expert

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in one skill would

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definitely

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flourish in the near future. In conclusion,

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can understand why people value academic

education

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but it seems to me that the importance of

education

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has paled

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over

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the years.