Some people believe that construction of new public buildings such as museums, towns halls and sporting is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

Public

buildings

often reflect the culture, religions and

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tradition

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traditions

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of the country and the

people

living in that country. They are an

intergral

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integral

part of community development. These days, some

people

believe in constructing new public

buildings

rather than renovating the old ones

whereas

some other

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others

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strongly

believed

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in renovating them rather than demolishing

and

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them and

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establishing

new

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new ones

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. In

this

essay,

i

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will be exploring both of

the

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these

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views and include my opinion regarding

it

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them

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. New building construction helps in introducing new and

morden

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modern

amenities,

accomodate

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accommodate

more

people

and mostly rejuvenate a whole community. Welcoming the new technologies

while

constructing these local

buildings

helps the society to be progressive and attract more tourism and investment.

For instance

, the

introdution

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introduction

of cutting-edge architecture assists in luring more

interests

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and the attention of the

people

which

defenitely

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definitely

help

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helps

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in

development

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the development

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of the tourism industry.

However

,

restoration

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the restoration

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of new amenities and the

buildings

itself

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themselves

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can be expensive and might overlook the value of historical preservation.

Similarly

,

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the rennovation

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rennovation

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renovation

of the existing

structurs

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structures

structure

helps in honouring cultural heritage and

maintain

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the

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historical significance. It can be more sustainable. In

this

regard,

rennovation

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renovation

of these local

buildings

can be conducted time and again and will be of low cost.

Likewise

, the idea of refurbishment can be a good idea for community

reinsforcement

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reinforcement

and

continiouity

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continuity

.

To sum up

, I

also

strongly believe that

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rennovation

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renovation

innovation

of

the

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historical

huildings

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buildings

like

museum

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museums

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, halls and sporting is more advantageous

rathar

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rather

than the concept of reconstruction.

Rennovation

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Renovation

helps in preserving the originality of

those historical and traditional architecture

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that historical and traditional architecture

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and

also

helps in balancing the financial budget.